The pie charts show the reasons for immigrants to a European country in 2009 and reasons for immigrants from a European country in 2009. Summrize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts show the reasons for immigrants to a European country in 2009
and reasons for immigrants from a European country in 2009.
Summrize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Reasons for immigrants to a Eropean Country
in 2009
7%
23%
· definite job
15%
· look for job
= study
· accompany / family
15%
25%
= other reasons
· no reason
15%
Reasons for immigrants from a Eropean Country
in 2009
4%
· definite job
23%
38%
· look for job
= study
· accompany / family
15%
= other reasons
· no reason
7%
13%
The essay lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The repetition of the task prompt indicates a lack of original analysis.
Suggestions
- Organize the essay with an introduction, body, and conclusion.
- Use linking words to connect ideas.
- Summarize the main trends and comparisons.
The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, lacking variety and precision.
The essay contains grammatical errors and lacks complex sentence structures.
The task is not adequately addressed. The essay repeats the task description without analysis or comparison.
Suggestions
- Provide an analysis of the main features.
- Make relevant comparisons between the two charts.
- Ensure the essay is at least 150 words.