The rise of social media platforms has made it easier for people to vent their frustrations and complaints publicly. What is the consequence of this trend? Is there any benefit to expressing complaints on social media?
With the advancements in technologies, coupled with changes in the way people interact, have come new trends that were unheard of before, with one of being the popularity of expressing complaints and the circumstances causing irritation on social networking sites. I believe that this development has got only positive consequences, both for businesses and individuals.
One major consequence of this tendency is that it provides with an opportunity to have a learning experience from their mistakes. The culture of venting frustrations and complaints publicly online allows businesses to be aware of what their customers have dissatisfaction with, which, on the face of it, seems to pose threats to their reputation. However, companies can make a wise use of negative reviews by improving problematic areas in their operations, an opportunity that was not available a couple of decades ago, since businesses at the time could only know their customers’ needs through the collection of surveys. As a result of these changes, not only do companies have a high likelihood of returning unpleased customers, but also they leave a good impression on other people by showing their commitment to clients. By contrast, failure to take people’s complaints into serious consideration might result in a disconnection between brands and their followers, ultimately in severe cases leading to boycotts.
As for benefits, a rise in online venting can facilitate in improving public mental health. The world is filled with various challenges, including the need to cope with pressure and anxiety precipitated by economic instability, political turmoil and social unrest which are taking place all around the globe. As a result, people have become hyperfocused on their own problems and emotionally disconnected from one another, eventually resulting in fewer meaningful conversations. During such difficult times, the availability of online communities, such as Quora and Reddit, where invididuals from diverse backgrounds have a chance to share their worries and receive emotional support make a difference in terms of releasing stress.
To conclude, an increase in the culture of venting frustrations and complaints on the social networking sites has favourable consequences, which are helping businesses to understand their clients’ needs and concerns. On an individual level, this development provides a platform for people to express their worries and release their stress.
The essay is logically organized and ideas are connected well. The introduction and conclusion are clear and relevant. However, there are a few instances where the flow of ideas could be improved.
“One major consequence of this tendency” is followed by an explanation that feels slightly disjointed. A more seamless transition would enhance the flow.
In the second paragraph, “As a result of these changes” could be more explicitly linked to the idea of customer satisfaction for better coherence.
Suggestions
- Try to use a wider range of linking words to connect your ideas more effectively.
- Ensure that your sentences flow smoothly from one to the next.
The essay uses a wide range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice.
“The culture of venting frustrations and complaints publicly online” could be rephrased for conciseness and clarity.
“An opportunity that was not available a couple of decades ago” is a bit wordy and could be more concise.
The essay uses a wide range of complex structures. There are a few grammatical errors and awkward constructions, but these do not impede overall understanding.
“The culture of venting frustrations and complaints publicly online” could be rephrased for conciseness and clarity.
“An opportunity that was not available a couple of decades ago” is a bit wordy and could be more concise.
The essay addresses the task effectively, presenting a clear position throughout. The arguments are well-developed and supported with relevant examples. However, the essay could benefit from a more detailed exploration of the potential drawbacks of this trend for balance. Additionally, the word count is slightly over 300, so you might want to check if it meets the count requirement for IELTS essays.
Suggestions
- Consider discussing potential counterarguments to provide a more balanced view.