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The rise of social media platforms has made it easier for people to vent their frustrations and complaints publicly. What is the consequence of this trend? Is there any benefit to expressing complaints on social media?

With the advancements in technologies, coupled with changes in the way people interact, have come new trends that were unheard of before, with one of being the popularity of expressing complaints and the circumstances causing irritation on social networking sites. I believe that this development has got only positive consequences, both for businesses and individuals.
One major consequence of this tendency is that it provides with an opportunity to have a learning experience from their mistakes. The culture of venting frustrations and complaints publicly online allows businesses to be aware of what their customers have dissatisfaction with, which, on the face of it, seems to pose threats to their reputation. However, companies can make a wise use of negative reviews by improving problematic areas in their operations, an opportunity that was not available a couple of decades ago, since businesses at the time could only know their customers’ needs through the collection of surveys. As a result of these changes, not only do companies have a high likelihood of returning unpleased customers, but also they leave a good impression on other people by showing their commitment to clients. By contrast, failure to take people’s complaints into serious consideration might result in a disconnection between brands and their followers, ultimately in severe cases leading to boycotts.
As for benefits, a rise in online venting can facilitate in improving public mental health. The world is filled with various challenges, including the need to cope with pressure and anxiety precipitated by economic instability, political turmoil and social unrest which are taking place all around the globe. As a result, people have become hyperfocused on their own problems and emotionally disconnected from one another, eventually resulting in fewer meaningful conversations. During such difficult times, the availability of online communities, such as Quora and Reddit, where invididuals from diverse backgrounds have a chance to share their worries and receive emotional support make a difference in terms of releasing stress.
To conclude, an increase in the culture of venting frustrations and complaints on the social networking sites has favourable consequences, which are helping businesses to understand their clients’ needs and concerns. On an individual level, this development provides a platform for people to express their worries and release their stress.

8.0

The essay is logically organized and ideas are connected well. The introduction and conclusion are clear and relevant. However, there are a few instances where the flow of ideas could be improved.

“One major consequence of this tendency” is followed by an explanation, but the transition could be smoother.

“As for benefits, a rise in online venting can facilitate in improving public mental health” could be rephrased for clarity and conciseness.

Suggestions
  • Try to use a wider range of linking words to connect your ideas more effectively.
  • Ensure that your sentences are clear and concise.

The essay uses a wide range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice.

“The world is filled with various challenges, including the need to cope with pressure and anxiety precipitated by economic instability, political turmoil and social unrest which are taking place all around the globe.”

could be simplified to “Global challenges such as economic instability, political turmoil, and social unrest can lead to pressure and anxiety.”

The essay shows a good control of a range of grammatical structures, with only minor errors. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect sentence construction.

“One major consequence of this tendency is that it provides with an opportunity”

should be “One major consequence of this tendency is that it provides an opportunity.”

The essay addresses the task effectively, providing a clear position throughout the response. The essay provides relevant, extended and supported ideas. However, the essay could benefit from more specific examples to support the arguments. The essay could benefit from more specific examples to support the arguments. For instance, mentioning specific companies that have improved their operations based on customer feedback could make the argument more concrete.

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  • Include specific examples to support your arguments. This will make your writing more concrete and persuasive.