The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The pictures compare the police budget in 2107 with in 2018 in specific area of Britain. The table illustrates the sources of money, while the pie chart shows where the finances were spent.
Overall, in the table, while the incomes in 2018 were higher than that of in 2017, the greatest figure was the money taken from National government in both years. In the chart the money spent on buildings and transport was the same in both years, wheras the biggest figure, which is salaries, declined.
The essay has a clear structure but lacks detailed explanation and connection between ideas.
Suggestions
- Add more detailed comparisons between the years.
- Use linking words to connect ideas more smoothly.
- Provide a clearer summary of the data.
The vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety and precision.
The grammar is generally correct but contains some errors and lacks complexity.
The response addresses the task but lacks detailed analysis and comparison.
Suggestions
- Provide more specific data from the table and charts.
- Include more detailed comparisons and analysis.
- Summarize the main trends and differences effectively.