The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and pie charts below illustrate the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010. Overall, both local and international students showed increases, with the latter showing a significant increase. The percentage of local students in Australia declined, while that of international students grew considerably.
Starting at 33,657 in 2001, the number of local research students in the universities of Australia grew markedly by 2010, reaching 39,488, while that of international students increased substantially to 14,593, after starting at 5,192. Total number of students was 38, 849 in 2001. However, these numbers grew to 54,081 by 2010.
The percentage of local students in Australian universities was 87% in 2001, with males showing 44%, females showing 43% respectively. However, the proportion of men declined considerably to 38% by 2010, while that of women dropped to 35%. The percentage of non-local students was 13% in 2001, with men showing 9%, and women showing 4%. However, the proportion of females surpassed that of males by 2010, with the former showing 15%, and the latter showing 12%, representing 27% in total.
The essay is well-organized with a clear structure. It logically presents the data and comparisons between 2001 and 2010.
Suggestions
- Use linking words to improve flow.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary accurately, though some repetition occurs.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with minor errors.
The essay successfully summarizes and compares the data from the table and pie charts, addressing all parts of the task.
Suggestions
- Include more specific data points for clarity.
- Ensure all comparisons are clear and relevant.