The table below highlights data on the number of travellers using three major British airports between 1988 and 2003.
The table illustrates the number of commuters utilizing three dominant British airways from 1988 to 2003.
Overall, the popular airline was Gatwick throughout the period, with the exception of Heathrow in 2000. Notably, the smallest number was surveyed at Stansted at the beginning of the era, while the reverse in the case at Gatwick in the final year.
Delving into details, at Heathrow, the number of passengers accounted for 27.2 million in 1998. Afterwards, this rate experienced a gradual increase of 11.8 million, from 36.4 million to 48.2 million within a year. Despite a slight decrease from 48.2 million to 33.2 million between 2000 and 2002, the number of visitors rose to 45.6 million in 2003.
As regards Gatwick, the number of commuters represented 36.5 million, which was the biggest number at the beginning of the period. After that, this figure increased markedly by 27.4 million, from 41.9 million to 69.3 million, during the next 5 years.
Finally, when it comes to Stansted, its initial rate was the smallest, constituting 17.3 million. The figures for 1999 and 2000 comprised 26.6 million and 39.9 million, respectively. During the first 3 years of the 21st century, this figure leveled off at 43.3.
The essay is logically organized and presents a clear overview of the main trends observed in the data. The use of cohesive devices is effective, and there is a good balance between paragraphing and the flow of information.
Suggestions
- Consider using a wider range of linking words or phrases to show more variety in your language use.
The essay demonstrates a good range of vocabulary and uses some less common and idiomatic language. There are a few awkward or incorrect word choices, but these do not significantly detract from the overall clarity or effectiveness of the communication.
The essay uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms and there are few grammatical errors. Those that do exist are minor and do not detract from the overall clarity or effectiveness of the communication.
The essay provides a detailed and accurate description of the data presented in the table. The writer highlights the main trends and makes relevant comparisons where necessary. The information is presented in a logical order and the overall organization of the essay is good.
Suggestions
- Make sure to use the correct terminology (e.g., ‘travelers’ instead of ‘commuters’ and ‘airports’ instead of ‘airways’).
- Pay attention to word choice to ensure clarity and accuracy.