The table below shows expenditures on advertising of four car companies in the UK in 2002.
The table provides a detailed comparison of advertising expenditure by four automobile manufacturers—Renault, Vauxhall, Rover, and Ceterizine—in 2002, across five different platforms: press, cinema, outdoor, radio, and television. Figures are expressed in millions of US dollars.
Overall, television dominated the advertising budgets of all four companies, while cinema accounted for the smallest share of expenditure. Renault emerged as the highest spender among the manufacturers, and radio advertising saw an identical allocation from all four brands.
Renault allocated the largest budget to advertising, spending $70 million on television alone. This was followed by Vauxhall, which spent $65 million on this platform. Rover and Ceterizine allocated slightly lower amounts, at $59 million and $45 million respectively. Press advertising was the second most significant expenditure for Renault and Rover, amounting to $45 million and $38 million respectively.
Spending on radio advertisements was consistent at $15 million across all four companies, making it the second-highest expenditure for Vauxhall and Ceterizine. By contrast, minimal funds were directed toward cinema and outdoor advertising, with a combined total of no more than $7 million. Notably, neither Rover nor Ceterizine invested in cinema advertising during this period.
The essay is well-organized and logically structured. Information is presented in a clear and coherent manner.
Suggestions
- Ensure all data points are accurately reported from the table.
- Clarify the comparison between companies for each advertising medium.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary accurately. Some repetition is present but does not impede understanding.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with minor errors.
The essay accurately describes the data from the table, but some figures are inaccurately reported. It provides a clear overview and highlights key trends.
Suggestions
- Double-check all data points for accuracy.
- Include a summary of overall spending patterns.