The table below shows expenditures on advertising of four car companies in the UK in 2002.
The table chart compares advertising expenditures of four car manufacturers in 2002, focusing on five platforms: press, cinema, outdoor, radio and TV. The units are measured in millions of dollars.
Overall,all these companies allocated more money on TV adverts while spending less on promoting their cars using cinema. It is also clear that Renault invested more money in its advertising campaign in total than the other car companies. Radio was the channel which attracted the same amount of money from all four manufacturers.
The companies allocated more funds to advertising in newspapers and TV in 2002, with Ceterizine spending 70 million dollars on this platform alone. In comparison, Vauxhal allocated 65 million dollars, Renault diverted 59 million dollars, and Rover spent 45 million dollars in television advertisment. Advertising on press was also significantly invested by Renault and Rover taking 45 million and 38 million dollars respectively.
Radio advertisement took the same 15 million dollars for all four companies that year, with this being the second major advertising expenditure for Vauxhal and Ceterizine.
Expenditures on cinema and outdoor advertising to promote their businesses were lower, with at most 7 million being spent in either of the platforms. Rover and Cetrizine did not allocate money to employ cinema for advertising purposes.
The essay is organized logically, but some comparisons and contrasts could be clearer.
Suggestions
- Use more linking words to connect ideas.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.
- Clarify comparisons between companies.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary appropriately, though some repetition is present.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with minor errors.
The essay addresses the task, providing an overview and specific details, but some inaccuracies are present.
Suggestions
- Ensure all data points are accurately represented.
- Provide a more balanced analysis of all categories.