The table below shows the number of cars made in three countries in 2003,2005,2009.
The table compares the number of cars produced in three countries from 2003 to 2009. Overall, while the car production in Argentina and in Thailand increased noticeably, the reverse was true for Australia. Moreover, Thailand outpeformed other nations, maintaining higher figures in each year despite a decline in the final year.
Argentina and Thailand showed increases in their car production. In 2003, 735,825 cars were made in Thailand, considerably more than those produced in Argentina, at 235,088. This disparity became even more pronounced in 2006, with Thailand`s figures rising to a staggering 1,162,356 while Argentina`s increased to 352,759. In the final year, while the number of cars manufactured in Thailand saw a slight drop to 999,963, Argentina continued its trajectory, reaching its peak of 466,089.
In contrast, Australia bucked the trend. In 2003, it made 452,163 cars, a figure that then fell significantly to 341,268 in 2006. After another decrease, the number of cars produced in this country stood at just 245,264 in the last year.
The essay is well-organized with clear comparisons between the countries. Transitions between ideas are smooth, maintaining a logical flow.
Suggestions
- Consider adding a concluding sentence to summarize the overall trends.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary accurately, with only minor errors in spelling.
The essay demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures with high accuracy.
The essay effectively addresses the task, providing a clear overview and detailed comparisons of the data.
Suggestions
- Ensure all years mentioned in the table are explicitly discussed.
- Consider adding a sentence to summarize the main points.