The table below shows the number of cars made in three countries in 2003,2006 and 2009
The table gives information on the number of cars made in three countries: Argentina, Australia, and Thailand, between 2003 and 2009.
Overall, Argentina saw a rise during the span, while Australia experienced a decline. In contrast, Thailand’s car production initially rose before experiencing a subsequent decrease.
There was an upward trend in the number of cars produced in Argentina. In 2003, 235,000 vehicles were produced in this country, and this number increased to 352,759 in the next three years before reaching its peak at 466,089 in 2009.
The reverse trend is true for Australian car manufacturing. Australia started the period by producing 452,164 cars which decreased to 341,268 in 2006. Further, Australia’s car production declined to 245,264 by 2009.
As for the number of cars manufactured in Thailand, in 2003, 735,825 cars were produced in this country. In the next three years, this production saw a significant rise and made 1,162,356 which went down to 999,963 in 2009.
The essay is logically organized and presents a clear overview of the trends in car production in the three countries. The use of cohesive devices is effective, with appropriate use of referencing and sequencing that helps to maintain a clear flow of information.
Suggestions
- Consider using a wider range of linking words or phrases to demonstrate your ability to use a variety of structures.
The essay demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, with appropriate use of academic and statistical language. The choice of words is generally precise and effectively conveys the intended meaning.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures and is generally free from grammatical errors. The use of complex sentences and passive voice is effective.
The essay provides a detailed and accurate description of the information presented in the table. The essay effectively highlights the key trends and makes relevant comparisons between the data.
Suggestions
- Ensure that all data is accurately reported and clearly presented. Pay attention to details such as units of measurement and the precise figures to ensure full accuracy.