The table below shows the number of full-time students from India who studied at various universities in the UK in 2020/21 and 2021/22.

The table illustrates that how many full-time students coming from India studied in six British universities in the belonged years as well as the change in numbers and percentage increase.
Overall, the greatest rise in Indian students could be seen in Sheffield University, while BPP University shows the lowest increase over the years. Additionally, there was a significant rise in the students number at country universities throughout the year.
The number of students at Coventry University was 2390 in 2020, seeing a more than two-fold increase in 2022, reaching nearly 5300. Furthermore, there was a considerable jump in Greenwich University’s number of students, rising from 2455 to 4540 throughout the period. These figures for BPP University were higher, seeing an increase a half from 3505 to 5145.
Looking at less popular universities, the number of students at Sheffield University accounted for 815 in 2020. However, these figures tripled throughout the period, reaching 2345. Anglia Ruskin University experienced a rise of 1340, while the same trend can be seen in the number of students at Leicester University, increasing from 1175 to 2390.

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The essay is generally well-organized, with a clear overview and logical structure. However, some sentences are slightly disjointed, and transitions between ideas could be smoother.

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The essay uses a range of vocabulary appropriately, though some phrases are slightly awkward or repetitive.

The essay demonstrates a fair range of grammatical structures, but there are several errors in sentence structure and verb usage.

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