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The table below shows the number of motor vehicles per 1000 inhabitants in eight countries in 1990 and 2000.

The table illustrates how many people out of a thousand owned a motor vehicle in various countries in 1990 and 2000. Overall, vehicle ownership in all countries experienced various upward trends except Bahams and Cambodia. This rise was the most significant in Brazil, followed by Romania. The country with the lowest rate of car ownership was Cambodia.
In 1990, 55 Brazilians and 68 Romanians out of 1000 had a sort of motor vehicle. The figures for both countries grew dramatically to 13 580 and 8012, respectively.
In Luxembourg and New Zealand, more than a half of a thousand people owned a private vehicle. While this went up negligible in New Zealand, the growth was more pronounced in Luxembourg, where 728 of every 1000 people had a car.
The number of people possessing a private vehicle in Chile was the same as that of Romania at 68, but it experienced a minimal rise of 20. In Jordan, private car ownership in every 1000 people more than tripled from 50 in 1990 to 157 in 2000.
The opposite trend was the case with Bahamas, where 187 people among 1000 owned a car in 2000, as opposed to 235 in 1990. Cambodia was the country with the lowest car ownership: only a person in every 1000 people had a motor vehicle 1990, which remained unchanged even after a decade.

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The essay is generally well-organized, with clear paragraphing. However, some transitions between ideas are abrupt, and there are minor inaccuracies in data representation.

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The essay uses a range of vocabulary with some variety and precision. There are minor errors in word choice.

The essay demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are some grammatical inaccuracies.

The essay addresses the task and includes relevant data, but there are minor inaccuracies in data representation.

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  • Ensure all data is accurately represented.
  • Include all relevant countries and data points.