The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart gives information about petrol expenditure and disposable income for the ten most expensive countries for petrol in a certain year.
Overall, the average monthly petrol expenditure lies between 270 and 320 dollars, although the average disposable income has a bigger range.
The countries from North Europe are the ones with the highest disposable incomes, such as Norway, Denmark, and Sweden. However, a higher purchasing power does not affect significantly the money spent on petrol by the population of these countries. For example, in Norway, the average disposable income is 4329.07 dollars and only 319.85 dollars is spent on petrol. On the other hand, Italians and Greeks have a significantly lower income and spend only less 40 dollars on petrol each month than Norway’s population.
The percentage of income spent on petrol is lowest in North Europe countries, as expected, which is between 7% and 8%, approximately.
From this graph, we can conclude that the petrol expenditure does not vary that much after income changes.
The essay presents information logically but lacks clear transitions between ideas.
Suggestions
- Use linking words to connect ideas.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence.
- Provide a concluding sentence.
The vocabulary is appropriate but lacks variety.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with occasional errors.
The essay addresses the task but lacks detailed comparisons and specific data points.
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- Include more specific data comparisons.
- Highlight key differences and similarities.
- Ensure all main features are summarized.