The table gives information about the number of international tourist arrivals (millions) in 9 countries in 2009 and 2010.
The table chart illustrates the percentage of elf global visitors coming in 9 countries in 2009 and 2010.
Overall, the almost all figures show the enrichments expected Hong Kong. Although it preserved its lowest rate it also has experienced the decline. France is the single country which is remained unchanged over the given period.
In 2009 France had 76 millions of tourist. This indicator didn’t change after a year. US and Spain that have almost equivalent enrichments, US +1.5%. The rise of travelers in Spain was more 0.3 than the former figure.
Moving to the table, considering remaining countries, Italy and Turkey which initial had distinct indicators have witnessed growth +2.3% and 33% respectively. Although there was a different expansion in the result in 2010 year they have similar pointers. Regarding to most highest enlargements China and Germany demonstrates considerable progress from 22 to 34 China and Germany from 11 to over doubled rate (23). Lastly Hong Kong almost as France remained stable exclusive the slightly drop from 10 to 9
The essay lacks logical flow and clear organization. Transitions between ideas are abrupt, and the information is not presented in a coherent manner.
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The essay uses limited vocabulary with some inaccuracies in word choice.
The essay contains numerous grammatical errors, affecting clarity and understanding.
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