The table gives information about the percentage of mobile phone users utilising different features from 2006 to 2010.
The table illustrates the percentages of mobile phone users who utilized seven different features-making calls, taking photos, sending and receiving text messages, playing games, searching the internet, playing music, and recording videos-over four year from 2006 to 2010.
Overall, making calls was the most famous feature in the table in all periods. It is also worth mentioning that the figure for recording videos was the lowest by 2010.
Turning to the specifics, the percentage of phone owners who used phones to make calls was 100%, which was the leading figure in 2006. Meanwhile, the figures for searching the internet and recording videos had no data. There was a slight difference in the figure for playing music and playing games: the former was only 12%, while the latter was 17%. The remaining various were taking photos and sending & receiving text messages was 66% and 73%, respectively
As for 2008, sending and receiving managers was the dominant figure and almost had no change. There was new data about the percentage of using phones for searching the internet and recording videos and they stood at 41% and 9%, respectively. Meanwhile, the figure for playing music and sending & receiving text messages fell slightly from 12 to 18, and 73 to 75, corresponding. The proportion of taking photos and playing games
In the final year, the highest proportion of people utilizing mobile phones for making calls while 99%. Meanwhile, the figures for taking photos and sending &receiving text messages witnessed gradual increases from 71% and 75% to 76% and 79%, respectively. There were sharp growth in the figures for recording videos and searching the internet: the former from 9% to 35% , while the letter from 41% to 73%.
The figure for playing music experienced rose noticeably from 18% to 26%. The remaining various was playing games fall gradually from 42% to 41%
The essay presents information in a mostly logical order, but there are some inconsistencies and unclear transitions.
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The vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety and precision in some areas.
The essay contains several grammatical errors and awkward sentence structures.
The essay addresses the task but lacks detailed analysis and has some inaccuracies.
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