The table presents information about university-level academic staff in one country.
The given table compares the number of country’s academic workers in different subjects between years 2005 and 2013, it also gives the information about the change in numbers, or in percent. The table also shows the way teachers are distributed among students.
Overall, every subject among 9 different subject experienced changes, with 7 of them having an increase in he academic staff, while the rest had a decrease. Medicine emerged as the subject with the highest addition to the staff, meanwhile education had a biggest decrease.
In regards to the details, medicine ranked the first among all the subjects in the number of 36868 workers employed in 2013, if it is compared to the year 2005, this subject had a 20.23% change. Moreover, it is the field with 1 teacher per 4 students. Moving on to the next subject, the number of teachers in Architecture increased by 824 people. Business experienced a noticeable rise in the number of its staff. In 2005, 23128 people taught this subject, meanwhile in 2013 there are 28769 people teaching this subject on the university level. The number of academic staff in Arts increased by 2594. In Sciences, the number of teaching staff accounted at 22092 by the year 2013.
By examining the table further, the teacher to student ratio was 1 per 11 in Humanities, and 1 per 7 in Engineering. Furthermore, Engineering emerged as the subject having the least change in the number of its teachers, it escalated by 85 teachers. Nevertheless, Agriculture had a drop in it’s university-level education staff, it went down by 47 people. Education had the biggest decrease, the number of their university teachers dramatically dropped by 334 people.
The essay is generally well-organized but has some issues with clarity and logical progression.
Suggestions
- Use clearer transitions between paragraphs.
- Ensure all data is clearly referenced and explained.
- Avoid unnecessary repetition.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary accurately but lacks variety in some areas.
The essay demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures but contains some grammatical errors.
The essay generally addresses the task requirements but could be more detailed in some areas.
Suggestions
- Include more specific data points to support statements.
- Ensure all relevant details from the table are covered.