the table shows the production of the workforce who are women and the percentage of managers who are women in five different countries
The given table compares five countries in terms of the proportion of women in the workforce and the percentage of female managers.
Overall, the highest proportion of women in the workforce is observed in Japan, whereas the low is in Egypt.However, in terms of female managers, the United States and Australia lead, and Sri Lanka has the smallest share.
In Japan, 48% of the workforce is made up of women, which is the highest among the countries, but only 17% of managers are women. Similarly, the United States has a high proportion of women in the workforce at 46%, with an equal 43% representation of women in managerial roles. Australia has slightly few women in its workforce at 42%, but a comparable 43% hold managerial positions.
In contrast, Sri Lanka and Egypt report much lower percentages. In Sri Lanka, women constitute 41% of the workforce, but only 9% of managers. Egypt shows the lowest figures, with just 20% of the workforce and 12% of managers being female.
The essay is logically organized and presents a clear overview. The information flows smoothly, and appropriate cohesive devices are used effectively.
The writer uses a good range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic usage. The vocabulary is generally used appropriately, with some minor errors.
The essay demonstrates a good control of a range of grammatical structures. There are a few minor errors, but they do not impede communication.
The essay provides a clear and detailed overview of the information presented in the table. The key features are identified and described appropriately.