The university court
The maps illustrate the changes that have taken place in the university court over a period of 34 years (1990-2024). Overall, the university has witnessed a dramatic transformation during this period, becoming noticeably less green and more modernized with the construction of new facilities, while some key features have remained relatively unchanged.
In 1990, the university was a simple area with key features including the car park and the park in the north and the outdoor pool to the east. The area also had a reception and changing room adjacent to the center of the university court. In the northwest, there was a woodland area. These were the car park and the tennis court in the southern part of the court.
In the present day, the university court has seen extensive development. The most noticeable changes include the replacement of the park and the car park with a basketball court and a tennis court, constructed in the west. Accordingly, another noticeable change is that the outdoor pool and the tennis court have been converted into an indoor pool and fitness center, respectively.
Despite these changes, certain key features have remained unchanged. The car park still stands in the north, while the reception room and the changing room are located in the center of the university area, remained unchanged
The essay provides a clear overview of the changes in the university court, but lacks cohesion in describing the transformations.
Suggestions
- Use clearer linking words to connect ideas.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.
- Avoid repetition of information.
The vocabulary used is appropriate but lacks variety and precision in some areas.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures but contains minor inaccuracies.
The essay addresses the task effectively, providing a clear overview of the changes. However, some details are inaccurately described.
Suggestions
- Ensure all details match the map accurately.
- Provide a more balanced description of changes.