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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

In today’s world, working hours have become a controversial issue, highlighting the suggestion to shrink the workweek so that employees can have an extended weekend accordingly. I am inclined to disagree with this statement since it can contribute to less competitiveness among companies, but also pinpoint how working less does not guarantee happiness.
As we live in a competitive world, where companies constantly strive to outperform each other, the reduction in working hours is likely to disrupt this competition. This applies to CEOs who are responsible for the flourishment of the company. In other words, leaders ought to work harder than anyone in the organization by putting in extra time in order to not be left behind by competitors when it comes to gaining market share and improving their services. However, if the company implements a compressed workweek scheme, it might lead to a reduction in economic output, thus preventing company growth.
On the other hand, employees whose responsibilities are far less than that of CEOs should stick to the same conventional working weeks. Although majorities tend to believe working less is a key determinant of happiness due to reduced stress levels, stress in the workplace is not always paired with changes in happiness levels since fulfillment in life depends on factors such as meaningful relationships and a sense of purpose. Instead, companies should incorporate health programs and create an engaged and productive workforce rather than posing to employees to work less.
In conclusion, implementing shortened working weeks is not always a good option, considering the fact it can lead to worsened function of the company by making it uncompetitive. Additionally, those who believe that working less has to do with happiness should seek fulfillment from community and family engagements, likewise, companies need to take a responsibility to maintain their workers’ mental well-being.

8.0

The essay is logically organized and ideas are connected well. The introduction and conclusion are clear and relevant. However, there are a few areas where the flow of ideas could be improved.

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The essay uses a wide range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice.

The essay uses a wide range of complex structures. There are a few minor errors, but they do not impede communication.

The essay addresses the task effectively, presenting a clear position throughout. The arguments are well-developed and supported with relevant examples. However, the essay could be improved by providing more specific examples to support the arguments.

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