There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter: -describe the problems -explain how these problems are effecting you and others -suggest what could be done about it.
Writing task1
Letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to register a complaint with you regarding poor service and some problems. I experienced last weekend when I use public transport for commute daily. I am hoping you find effective solutions for this issue.
When I use public transport on Monday 24th December, I noticed some problems connect with them. While I was in your transport anyone approched and offered me any assistance. And there were some delays due to mulfanction equipments. So all passengers were waiting a long to this transport which can lead to some stressful situations between individuals. After that most of the people decided to ask one of the employees for help but he showed no interest to help with them. Also the transports have less places for the passengers put their suitcases and luggages.
I regret to have been in your service and will never be there. However you should know how poorly service and employees treats. I am hoping you can focus on our problems quickly and find effective way for these issues.
The letter is somewhat organized, but the flow of ideas is not very clear. The writer uses some cohesive devices, but they are not always used effectively, resulting in a lack of clarity. The letter is somewhat organized, but the flow of ideas is not very clear. The writer uses some cohesive devices, but they are not always used effectively, resulting in a lack of clarity.
Suggestions
- Use a variety of cohesive devices appropriately.
- Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that all sentences in the paragraph relate to this topic.
The writer uses a sufficient range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common vocabulary. However, there are some inaccuracies in word choice and spelling.
The writer uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and there are some errors in grammar and punctuation. However, these errors do not generally impede communication.
The writer addresses all parts of the task. However, the writer could be more specific in describing the problems and explaining how they affect the writer and others. The writer could also provide more specific examples to support their points.
Suggestions
- Be more specific in describing the problems and how they affect you and others.
- Provide specific examples to support your points.