There is too much noise in many public places in cities because of transports. What are the main causes? What measures can be taken to address this?
These days it is said by many individuals that, in some big cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of transports is a big problem for many people. In the following paragraphs, I will outline some causes of this issue and give some suggestions to solve them.
To begin with, one of the main reasons of high noise which come from vehicles is the is the increasing number of transports. As you know, in the world, producing transport is developing very fast and people’s demand to this product is also high. That is why in big cities and towns, there are a good range of transports. The researchers say that, 50 % of families have their own cars. The next cause of it is that, the vehicles which were made 1 or 2 decades before can sounds worse than new ones. As their parts are very old and they have several troubles and many owners of these transports do not want to fix them. Such as, one of the noisiest parts of these transports is their engine.
Despite the power of these reasons, there are several suggestions to solve high volume of vehicles and one of them is that, people should utilize public transports instead of own cars. Due to the fact that, in roads, the number of transports will decrease, if people use public vehicles. Apart from this, using electronic transports instead of other types is also the best way to solve the problem. As, the electronic cars have less sound than old cars and they are very comfortable for using.
In conclusion, there are several reasons of this situation, however, we can solve this issue with some ways.
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