Two pie charts
The two pie graph shows the main sources of energy for USA in decade. Units are measured in percentages.
Overall, Oil was the largest important energy for both pie graph while natural gas were the highest in the first year
Looking in1980 in more detail it important oil with higher amount across others making up 42 percentage. The amount of natural gas followed distantly at 26 percentage, while 22 percentage belonged to imported coal amounts, which was twice as high as that of peas. In 1980 imported 5 percentage of hydroelectric power and nuclear power in that year.
In 1990, its biggest imported energy was oil, at 33 percentage making .The amount of coal imported comprised 27 percentage. The percentage of natural gas declined slightly to 1% in 1990. The proportion of hydroelectric power remained the same with 5% whereas nuclear power of energy had went up a slightly to 10% over a decade
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Limited range of vocabulary with some inaccuracies.
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