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The images illustrate alternation between the past and present, highlighting the changes that have occurred in Lynwich College. The collage underwent a transformation which became more residential within the given timeframe.
In 2006, Lynwich collage was mostly greener area. There was a highway which is located the north part and parking lot the north-east corner of collage. It can be seen library after car park, it used to connect to education buildings with small path. Moreover, huge sports fields were situated in south-east part. Additionally , it can be found a lot of tree in the collage campus.
By now, the collage had undergone a complete makeover. The most significant change is transportation system such as including bus station. The parking lot had marginally shrunk after that it is added bike storage. While the sports fields remain nearly, the library turned into a new sports centre. In the south-west corner some trees has gone and its place is library. The most noticeable improvement is erected a modern cafeteria in the middle of collage campus.

4.5

The essay attempts to compare the past and present states of Lynwich College but lacks clear organization and logical progression.

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  • Use clear paragraphs to separate different points.
  • Ensure logical progression between ideas.
  • Use linking words to improve flow.

The essay uses basic vocabulary and lacks variety in lexical resources.

The essay contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks complex structures.

The essay partially addresses the task but lacks detailed comparisons and clear descriptions.

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  • Provide more detailed comparisons.
  • Ensure all changes are clearly described.
  • Include more specific details from the maps.