Write a letter to a local newspaper expressing your opinion about an environmental issue in your community. In your letter, include: • A brief introduction of yourself and why you are writing • The specific environmental issue you are concerned about • Your opinion on the issue and any suggestions for improvement • A call to action for readers or local authorities

Dear Sir or Madam,
The reason why I am addressing you is to express my concerns about an environmental issue that occurred in our neighborhood.
I have been suffering from the pollution of the streets, since I moved there. Owing to the lack of trash can in our residential area, most of the population throw their rubbish on the roads.
Due to this matter, some members of the families get various diseases. In order to solve this issue, I inquire you to inform the responsible heads to provide our community with enough trash cans.
I will appreciate your attention, unless your newspaper contributes to improvements in our neighborhood. Thank you for considering my concerns.
Best regards,
Jasur Sulaymonov.

5.0

The letter is logically organized with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. However, there are some issues with the flow of ideas and the use of cohesive devices.

Suggestions

Use a variety of cohesive devices to improve the flow of your ideas.
Make sure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that all sentences in the paragraph relate to this topic.

The letter uses a sufficient range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are some issues with word choice and collocation.

The letter uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms and there are few grammatical errors. However, there are some issues with punctuation and sentence structure.

The letter addresses the task and provides a clear expression of the writer’s opinion. However, the letter could be improved by providing more specific details and examples.