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Write a letter to a local newspaper expressing your opinion about an environmental issue in your community. In your letter, include: • A brief introduction of yourself and why you are writing • The specific environmental issue you are concerned about • Your opinion on the issue and any suggestions for improvement • A call to action for readers or local authorities

Dear sir or Madam. TASK 1
I hope this letter find you well. I am writing to express my concern about to draw your attantion to the waste management issues in our neighborhood.
To be honest, if you visit our neighborhood you can see lettered with plastic, botles, and another trash. And also we are not breath from clean air. Also harm the environment by polluting the soil and air.
From my perspective, if local authorities had taken this affair seriously, significant damage to nature could have been avoided. In addition, placing more bins in public spaces help reduce the problems.
In conclusion, l urge local authorities to take this matter seriously. And also, this will ensure that residents can breathe clean air and nature remains un harmed.
Your sincerly
OG’ABEK KARIMOV

4.0

The letter is somewhat organized, but the flow of ideas is not entirely clear. The introduction and conclusion are somewhat repetitive, and there are some issues with word choice and spelling that affect the overall coherence of the letter.

Suggestions
  • Try to use a variety of cohesive devices to improve the flow of your ideas.
  • Make sure to fully develop your points in each paragraph.

The letter uses a somewhat informal tone and there are some issues with word choice and spelling that affect the overall quality of the writing.

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and readability of the writing.

The letter addresses the task and presents a clear opinion on the environmental issue in the community. However, the letter does not provide any specific details or examples to support the opinion.

Suggestions
  • Try to provide specific details or examples to support your points.
  • Make sure to fully develop your argument in the body paragraphs.