Write a letter to a local newspaper expressing your opinion about an environmental issue in your community. In your letter, include: • A brief introduction of yourself and why you are writing • The specific environmental issue you are concerned about • Your opinion on the issue and any suggestions for improvement • A call to action for readers or local authorities

Letter task1
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing this letter in regarding of your advertisement given in newspaper on last Sunday. My name is Jasmina, studying in intermediate school in my town. I would like to inform you that expressing an environmental issue in my community. We are facing some issues like, increasing temperature, air pollutiom and others in present time.
One of the issue causes of pollution in our city and many vehicles influnce on our roads. The emissions from these vehicles are effecting the air which is leading to some problems like many diseases. These issues impact to peoples’ overall health and lifestyle significantly.
Another significant problem connect garbage. Because the streets and roads were full of waste due to the large number of transportation. In addition, the foul smell overcome from these garbage is unberable and has made the daily lives of residents extremely unpleasant.
I would like to offer you a few suggestions in spite of these problems. It is the effective way increase the disposal mechanisms for reduce the garbage. We trust that you can focus on our problems and suggestions quickly.
Yours faithfully,
Mamarajabova Jasmina.

5.5

The letter is logically organized and the ideas are connected, but there are some issues with the flow of the letter and the use of cohesive devices.

Suggestions

Use a variety of cohesive devices to improve the flow of your letter.
Make sure to fully develop your ideas in each paragraph.

The letter uses a sufficient range of vocabulary and there is some evidence of an awareness of collocation. However, there are some inaccuracies in word choice and spelling.

The letter uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and there is some evidence of a variety of grammatical structures. However, there are several grammatical errors that can cause some difficulty for the reader.

The letter addresses the task and presents a clear position throughout the response. However, the letter could be more fully developed and supported with specific details.