Write a letter to a local newspaper expressing your opinion about an environmental issue in your community. In your letter, include: • A brief introduction of yourself and why you are writing • The specific environmental issue you are concerned about • Your opinion on the issue and any suggestions for improvement • A call to action for readers or local authorities

Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to express my concern about an environmental issue that has been affecting our neighborhood. I would like to offer some suggestions in order to provide the necessary items and I am hoping that you can solve these problems .
I have been living in there for three years. So, my neighborhood has some issues in the demand for the environment.The one problem of plastic pollution has become increasingly rising with different bags,bottles and other unnecessary things littering our streets parks and museums.Additionally it can significant affect for wildlife and public health. So animals hurt serious effects from pollution and change their food with different germs.
In my opinion, this community must come together to address this pressing issue.I will give some purposes for improvement. You should regularly organize clean-up in these places that I said.Therefore, many companies should limit or ban the use of plastic products. We can reduce plastic waste and move toward a cleaner in the future for our children.I hope this letter serves a call for responsibility.
Thank you for your considering my important work and I look forward your response. Therefore I would really happy and appreciate you when you discuss my ideas

5.5

The essay is logically organized and the ideas are connected, but there are some issues with the flow of ideas and the use of cohesive devices.

Suggestions

Use a variety of cohesive devices to improve the flow of your ideas.
Make sure to fully develop your points in each paragraph.

The essay uses a sufficient range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are some inaccuracies in word choice and collocation.

The essay uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms and there are few grammatical errors. However, there are some errors in article and preposition usage, as well as some awkward phrasings.

The essay addresses the task and provides a clear position throughout the response. However, the development of the argument could be more fully supported with specific details and examples.