WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar graphs compare how much time was allocated for the home chores between both genders ,men and women in unspecified countries.( They were measured percentage,and minut.)
Overall, the proportion of females exhibited most significant patterns in terms of cooking and cleaning that was true for in minut, while the males hold the leading position in the rest figures ,namely pet care and house repairs ,which were the reverse was true for women. The share for pet care , however, showed the same figures.(In minutes).
Cooking share was observed most in women proportion at just above 80% , being almost four times as highest of pet care , which made up 20%.This figure for cleaning ranked second at nearly over 60, whereas the share of house repairs accounted for a bit under 10%. The proportion of cooking in men , however, showed the largest figue along other chores at 60 %, which was two third of the shre for cleaning , while pet care and house repairs consisted of around 20% respectively.
Female dominated both figures cooking ranking first and cleaning, at 85% and at just below 80% respectively, having by far the highest of house repairs at mere 5%. Pet care exhibited and identical figures in both genders, at 20% , corresponding on the house repairs at a bit under 20% in figure for males, whereas in this figure for cooking and cleaning accountd for 60 %and 45%.
The essay attempts to organize information but lacks clear logical progression. Some sentences are difficult to follow.
Suggestions
- Clarify sentence structure.
- Use linking words to connect ideas.
- Organize information logically.
Limited range of vocabulary with some repetition and misuse of words.
Frequent grammatical errors and awkward sentence structures.
The response addresses the task but lacks clarity and accuracy in data reporting.
Suggestions
- Ensure data is accurately reported.
- Provide clear comparisons.
- Summarize main features effectively.