you are currently trying to improve the knowledge of language which is not your first language. You have a friend who know this language. Write a letter to your friend
Dear Nancy,
Hope you are doing well. As we talked lest I was time we met about learning french. I was really impressed by the knowledge that you have about different languages. I am keen to learn french as you know I got job in Montreal, and people there mostly communicate in french.
I am reaching out to you for the suggestions to start. It will be very helpful for me if you can teach me some basics of the language. Moreover, ut will be easy for me to practice it with you firt. Additionally, please recommend me some good books for the same and other additional material.
To discuss it, we should meet thiS weekend if it suits your time table. Let me know what do you think about this plan.
Best wishes,
Priyanshi
The essay has a clear structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion. However, some sentences are not logically connected, and there is a lack of clear progression in some parts.
Suggestions
- Use a variety of cohesive devices to ensure smooth transitions between sentences and paragraphs.
- Ensure that each paragraph has a clear main idea and that all sentences in the paragraph support this idea.
The letter uses a range of vocabulary, but there are some inaccuracies and informal language that should be avoided in an IELTS exam.
The letter contains several grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures.
The letter addresses the task and provides relevant information, but the writer could have included more specific details about their learning preferences and goals.
Suggestions
- Include specific details about your learning preferences and goals in the letter.
- Provide more detailed explanations of why learning French is important for you.