You are looking for a full-job, and recently you saw a job opening in an advertisement. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like to do and say what experience and skills you have
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in the position teacher at 19 school as advertised on internet.This job matches my experience and interests.
My name is Durdona Salohiddinova, and I hold a bachelor’s degree in Mathematics. Over the past three years, I have gained valuable experience teaching mathematics, during which I developed effective teaching strategies to engage students and improve their understanding of the subject.
.I am a very flexible person for an new working environment and am a creative in finding solutions for the problems.
I believe I will make a difference in your school through my passion and experience in education. In this regard, it is appropriate to monitor the conversation with its appearance.
I would be available for a face-to-face interview at any time.
Yours faithfully,
Salohiddinova Durdona
The letter is logically organized, and the applicant’s intentions are clear. However, there are some issues with the flow of ideas and the use of cohesive devices.
Suggestions
- Use a variety of cohesive devices to improve the flow of your letter.
- Make sure to fully develop your points in each paragraph.
The letter uses a sufficient range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are some inaccuracies in word choice and collocation.
The letter demonstrates a good control of a range of grammatical structures, with only minor errors. However, there are some issues with punctuation and sentence structure.
The applicant’s introduction and conclusion are clear and relevant. However, the letter could be improved by providing more detailed examples of the applicant’s teaching strategies and student engagement techniques. Additionally, the applicant should ensure that all statements are fully supported by evidence from their experience.
Suggestions
- Provide more detailed examples of your teaching strategies and student engagement techniques.
- Ensure that all statements are fully supported by evidence from your experience.