You booked a tour package for your family through a travel agent. You had enjoyed the tour very much. Write a letter to the travel agent to thank them. In your letter: • Mention the tour you took • Describe the things about the tour you and your family liked the best • Also, suggest any improvements to make things better

Dear Sir or Madam
I am writting to express my sincere gratitude for organizing such as incredible tour for my family. We have booked the tour package from your agent called ,, Traditional airways”, but our vacation was did not as like as company’s nickname, because the trip was unconventional, wonderful and unforgotable, of course. We got more experiences than we expected.
Our holiday was to the London and we got a lot of impressions from there, because the facilities of your agency was better compared to another travel agents.For instance, these restaurants were modern, quiet and dishes also were taste.Futhermore the hotel was well chosen too.My family is immeasurable grateful with your travel agent.
In my opinion, you should try employ wrokers who is know at least three languages, because some workers were russians and they did not understand us.I believe that if you do that, the demand for the agency increased. Generally, conveniences were amazing. We are planning to go next holiday with your agent.Thanks for the good adventure.
Your sincerely,
Abduvohid

5.5

The letter is somewhat organized, but the flow of ideas is not entirely clear. The use of transitions and cohesive devices is limited, affecting the overall coherence. The letter jumps from one idea to another without clear connections, making it a bit difficult to follow the narrative smoothly.

Suggestions

Use a variety of cohesive devices to improve the flow of your letter.
Make sure each paragraph has a clear central topic.

The letter uses a range of vocabulary, but there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrases. The letter attempts to use a range of vocabulary, but there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrases. Phrases like “incredible tour,” “unforgettable,” and “impressive experiences” are used effectively. However, there are some awkward and unclear expressions that could be refined for better clarity. The letter uses some descriptive language to express gratitude and describe experiences. However, there are instances of awkward phrasing and incorrect word choices that could be improved for clarity and impact.

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity and readability. These include errors in subject-verb agreement, word form, and sentence structure. The letter contains several grammatical errors, including errors in subject-verb agreement, word choice, and sentence structure. These errors affect the overall clarity and professionalism of the letter.

The letter addresses the task and provides relevant, extended and supported ideas. However, the letter could be more concise and focused. The letter addresses the task by expressing gratitude for the tour organized by the travel agent and providing feedback on the experience. The writer shares specific details about the tour, such as the quality of restaurants and hotels, and suggests improvements, such as employing multilingual staff.