You borrowed a book from a friend and you have not yet returned it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Apologize for not returning the book on time. • Explain why you haven't returned it yet. • Suggest a time when you can return it. You should write at least 150 words
Dear Anvar,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to faithfully apologize for waiting the book I borrowed from you. I know itʼs been longer than mentioned time, and I feel really inconveniently for not keeping my promise to return it on time. about holding onto it longer than I should have, especially knowing how much you value your books.
The reason for the delay is that I’ve been swamped with work and personal commitments recently. Unfortunately, this made it harder for me to find a convenient time to meet up and return the book. On top of that, I got so engrossed in the book because it’s truly a great read, which added to my delay.
I assure you, the book is in perfect condition, and I deeply appreciate you lending it to me. I can return it to you this weekend if that works for you, or at any other time that’s convenient. Please let me know what works best for you.
Thank you for your understanding, and I promise to be more punctual in the future.
Yours sincerely,
Muhiddin Axmadov.
The letter is logically organized and the ideas are connected, but there are some areas where the flow of ideas could be improved. The letter follows a logical structure, but the organization of the paragraphs could be enhanced. The introduction clearly states the purpose of the letter, but the transition to the body paragraphs is a bit abrupt. The body paragraphs each focus on a single idea (apology, explanation, and suggestion), which is good, but the connection between these ideas could be made clearer. The conclusion effectively summarizes the main points but could be more comprehensive.
Suggestions
- Use a variety of cohesive devices to ensure smooth transitions between ideas.
- Make sure to fully develop your points in each paragraph.
The letter uses a range of vocabulary and there is some evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice. The letter demonstrates a good command of a range of vocabulary, especially with words and phrases related to the topic. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice that detract from the overall effectiveness of the letter. Additionally, the use of more varied and precise language could help to convey the intended meaning more clearly.
The letter uses a variety of complex structures. However, there are a few grammatical errors and awkward constructions. The letter attempts to use a variety of sentence structures, but there are some grammatical errors that hinder the overall clarity and effectiveness of the writing. For example, the use of the word “waiting” instead of “waiting for” or “delaying” in the context of the book being returned is incorrect. Proofreading the letter for such errors and making the necessary corrections can help to improve the overall quality of the writing.
The letter addresses all the required elements and provides a clear explanation and suggestion. However, the letter could be more concise and to the point. The letter effectively addresses all the required elements of the task. The writer apologizes for not returning the book and explains the delay by citing work and personal commitments. The writer also suggests a specific time to return the book, which is good. However, the letter could be more concise and to the point to improve clarity and effectiveness.
Suggestions
- Be more concise and to the point in your writing.
- Provide more specific details in your explanations and suggestions.