You borrowed a book from a friend and you have not yet returned it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Apologize for not returning the book on time. • Explain why you haven't returned it yet. • Suggest a time when you can return it. You should write at least 150 words.
Task 1
Dear Jasmina,
The reason why I am writing you is to apologize for not returning the book I received from you. I would like to explain why I could not return the book in time and suggest a time when I can return it.
First of all, thank you for giving me your book. Because this book has been a effective thing for me during my working process. But I can not return the book in time and I regret it. I apologize for this situation.
I wanted give you your book. But I needed your book for me. And finally I finished my project and return it. However I got new assignment with a deadline. So I spent a lot of time for finishing it. As a result I keep it.
I want to fix this. I will do my best to send it back to you as soon as possible. I will return the book at converience if you need the book.
I hope you can forgive me for this. I value our friendship and I will really sorry for any trouble I have caused.
Best wishes,
Boʻronova Sarvinoz.
The essay has a clear structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion. However, the body of the letter lacks clear paragraphs, which makes it difficult for the reader to follow. The use of transitional phrases is limited, affecting the overall flow of the letter. Additionally, the conclusion could be more comprehensive, summarizing the main points discussed.
Suggestions
- Use paragraphs to separate different ideas or points.
- Use a variety of cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs more effectively.
The letter uses a limited range of vocabulary, with several words and phrases being repeated. There are also instances of awkward or incorrect word usage, affecting the overall clarity and effectiveness of the letter. Additionally, the letter lacks variety in terms of complex vocabulary and expressions.
The letter contains several grammatical errors, including issues with subject-verb agreement, incorrect use of articles, and awkward sentence structures. These errors affect the overall clarity and readability of the letter. Additionally, the letter lacks variety in terms of sentence structures, predominantly using simple sentences instead of incorporating complex ones where appropriate.
The letter partially addresses the task, providing an apology, explaining the delay, and suggesting a time to return the book. However, the explanation for not returning the book on time is unclear and could be more detailed to provide a better understanding of the situation. Additionally, the suggestion for a convenient return time could be more specific, providing an actual date or time.
Suggestions
- Ensure that each paragraph has a clear focus and is well-developed.
- Provide a more detailed explanation for the delay and more specific return time.