You borrowed a book from a friend and you have not yet returned it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Apologize for not returning the book on time. • Explain why you haven't returned it yet. • Suggest a time when you can return it. You should write at least 150 words.
Hi Ogʻabek
I am writing to sincerely apologize for not returning your book on time. From my perspective, this book is absolutely important for you because this book has a lot of essential information and details. I use this book for my English tasks and chores.
This truth is, I have been extremely busy with work and individual commitments lately. In addition, I will ask you for this book in three or four more days. And I want to return this book from you but now this book is absolutely important for me.
I am apologize for the delay, I want to return on time. I think this book is absolutely important for you. In addition, I have an idea if I dropped this book by your house this sunday evening, and I would take your other book when we meet in your house.
Good looking out for your understanding, and once again. I apologize for the delay, and I returned this book as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely
Xumorov Behruz
The letter has a logical flow, but some parts are confusing and repetitive. The use of symbols ($) at the beginning is unclear. The letter should have a clear structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion. Transitions between ideas are abrupt, and the repetition of the same ideas makes the letter seem longer than necessary.
Suggestions
- Use a clear structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion.
- Avoid being repetitive.
- Be mindful of your audience and the purpose of your letter.
The letter uses simple vocabulary, but the repetition of certain phrases and the use of symbols ($) are not appropriate for the task. The choice of words sometimes lacks precision, and there are several instances of awkward phrasing.
The letter contains several grammatical errors and awkward constructions. Punctuation is often misused or missing, affecting the clarity of the message. Some sentences are incomplete or constructed awkwardly, making them difficult to understand.
The letter does not effectively address the task. While the writer apologizes and explains the reasons for the delay, the use of symbols ($) is confusing, and the message could be more clearly conveyed. The writer also mentions a specific timeframe but does not stick to it consistently.
Suggestions
- Maintain a consistent timeframe throughout the letter.
- Provide clear explanations and stick to the task requirements.