You found a piece of lost luggage with someone's belongings labeled with their name and address. Write a letter to the owner. In your letter describe the luggage you found; explain where you found it; suggest how the owner could get it back.
Dear Sir or Madam
The reason why I am addressing you is to express my concern about the problem. I found your luggage two days ago from the train station.
Moreover, I found a piece of lost luggage, and this luggage has someone’s belongings labeled with their name and address. So that’s why I want to return this luggage from you. In addition, I found it in train station and I have two ideas for return. The first idea is to give policy, and the second idea is to return this letter.
On the other hand, I think this luggage is more important than you because it has many important things in the luggage. If I describe the luggage, your luggage’s color is blue, and the size is large, and there are several documents and your passport in the luggage. In my opinion, this luggage is more important from you.
From my perspective, this luggage belongs to you. If this luggage is lost, you may call my phone number. My phone number is +97 226 16 01
Yours faithful
Xumorov Behruz
The essay has a logical flow, but the coherence is sometimes hindered by unclear or redundant information. The use of cohesive devices is adequate, but could be improved for better clarity.
Suggestions
- Try to maintain a clear and direct line of communication. Avoid adding unnecessary information or redundancy.
- Use a variety of cohesive devices to improve the flow of your letter.
The essay demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word usage.
The essay has a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and the grammatical structures are mostly accurate. However, there are a few errors that affect the clarity of the message.
The essay addresses the task and provides a clear purpose to the letter. However, the letter could be improved by providing more specific details about the returned luggage and the owner’s belongings.
Suggestions
- Provide specific details about the returned luggage and the owner’s belongings to make the reader more engaged.