You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter. Say why you are writing Describe your interest to work as an English teacher Explain why you would be a suitable teacher for that community college. Write at least 150words

Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to express my interest in work as an english teacher in your community college for the night shift, and I am appreciate this response to an advertisement that was published in the local newspaper a few days ago.
I want to work in the night classes as a teacher, and I am hoping that I have enough teaching experience, especially working with young adults.I have been looking for this kind of opportunity for a long time so finally I find it.I recently meet your advertisement in my village center.I am really happy about helping students improve their modern language skills and also create new lessons which they need.Therefore, I have some experience about emergency service for the children when they have bad health issues.I resist that give punishments for them because it can cause of stress. I try to help children with this kind of problem that they meet.Additionally, I will decide to appreciate you when you create and offer several facilities in order to provide modern furniture or recourse for the students.
Thank you for considering my letter, and I look forward to discussing how I can support your students’ learning goals .
Your sincerely
Nazirova Bibijahon

5.5

The essay is logically organized and the ideas are connected, but there are some issues with the flow of ideas and the use of cohesive devices.

Suggestions

Use a variety of cohesive devices to improve the flow of your ideas.
Make sure to fully develop your points in each paragraph.

The essay demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are some issues with word choice and collocation.

The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, but there are some errors in sentence construction and tense usage.

The essay addresses the task and provides a clear response to the prompt. However, the argument could be more fully developed and supported with specific examples.