You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. * GDP (Gross Domestic Product) is the total value of goods that are made and services that are provided in a country.
The chart line illustrates information about the rate of spending money in medical domain, among 12 European countries, over three different years .The units are measured by the Gross Domestic Product.
Overall, it is clear from the graph that the European Health Expenditure didn’t change a lot over the time ,most of countries spent the same amount throughout , while others made a slight growth , whereas few ones spent less amount .
According to what is shown , Switzerland spends an unchanged rate of 11 per cent over the 3 periods, which is the highest percentage in the whole countries , nutherless the Estonian health investisment was the lowest all the time with only 3 per cent spending .Morover , in 2007, France made a 11 per and after 5 years decreased to 7 percent , in the other hand countries like Denmark, Lithuania and Norway showed a steady upward trend in 2012 compared to the two previous periods .
However , the Spanish health expenditure remained stable at 8 per cent all over the time.
The essay has a logical organization with clear progression of ideas. However, there are some issues with the flow of information and ideas.
Suggestions
- Use a variety of cohesive devices to improve the flow of information and ideas.
- Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that all sentences in the paragraph relate to that topic.
The essay uses a limited range of vocabulary and there are some inaccuracies in word choice and spelling.
The essay contains a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, but there are some grammatical errors and inaccuracies.
The essay provides a basic overview of the information presented in the chart, but the task is not fully completed. The essay does not provide a detailed analysis or comparison of the data.
Suggestions
- Provide a more detailed analysis or comparison of the data. Try to explain the reasons for the trends or patterns in the data.