zarina
Dear Sir,
I am writing to your inform you that, regrettably, I am unable to continue with the evening course due to unforeseen circumstances.
As you know, I am currently working full-time and while initially managed to balance my work and studies, my professional responsibilities have significantly increased over the past few weeks. This has resulted in longer working hours and additionally commitments.
I value the learning and skills I have gained so far and do not wish to discontinue permanently. If possible, I would like to explore options for deffering my enrollment to a future term to transferring to an online version of the course, should one be available.
I deeply appreciated your understanding and support, I hope to resume my studies when my schedule becomes more manageable. Please let me know the necessary steps I need to take to formalize this request.
Thank you for your guidance and for making the course such a rewarding experience.
Your sincerely,
Zarina
The essay is logically organized and the ideas are connected, but there are some areas where the flow of information could be improved.
Suggestions
- Consider using more varied linking words to improve the flow of information.
- Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic.
The essay uses a wide range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice.
The essay demonstrates a good control of a range of grammatical structures, with only minor errors. However, there are a few instances where the choice of tense is awkward or incorrect.
The essay addresses the task and provides a clear response to the prompt. The writer’s position is clear and supported by relevant examples. However, the essay could be improved by providing more specific details about the unforeseen circumstances that led to the decision to discontinue the course.
Suggestions
- Consider providing more specific details about the unforeseen circumstances that led to the decision to discontinue the course. This will help to make your explanation more convincing and help the reader to understand your situation better.