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Task 1

The bar charts represent US’ annual salary and the number of households that earned them in 2007, 2011 and 2015 years.
Overall, the number of people who earned from 50,000$ to 74,999$ have remained unchanged in 8 years, while all other figures increased. People who earned more than 100,000$ had the biggest number in 2007 and 2015. The exception was the number of people who earned between 25,000$ and 49,999$.
In 2007, 25 millions of people received less than 25,000$, slightly more people earned from 25,000 to 49,999. There was 20 millions of workers that received between 50,000$ and 74,000$. The lowest figure in this year was workers that have been paid 75,000$-99,999$(30 million). And the highest figure was 2 times more than the lowest one. People from that category gained more than 100,000$.
In 2011, the number of people earning 50,000$-74,999& have remained unchanged, and the figure of workers that earn more have decreased slightly, as well as others that earn more than 100,000$. Additionally, the number of people that had from the minimal annual till 49,999$ have increased by 4 millions.
In 2015, those who received from 0$ to 49,999$ have decreased a little, while people who earn 75,000$-99,999& have risen and reached their peak of 15 millions. The number of workers that have been paid more than 100,000$ hit the highest number of all 3 years by 33 million.

5.5

The essay presents information in a somewhat logical manner but lacks clear paragraphing and transitions.

Suggestions
  • Use clear paragraphing to separate different years or income groups.
  • Include more linking words to improve flow.
  • Summarize main points in a concluding sentence.

The essay uses a range of vocabulary, but some word choices are repetitive or unclear.

The essay demonstrates basic grammatical structures but contains errors in tense and number agreement.

The essay generally addresses the task, but some details are inaccurate or unclear.

Suggestions
  • Ensure all figures are accurate and consistent with the chart.
  • Provide a clear overview of the main trends.
  • Avoid unnecessary repetition of information.
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