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Task 1: Letter Writing You recently attended a workshop on time management skills organized by your local community center. You found the workshop very helpful and would like to express your gratitude to the organizer. Write a letter to the organizer. In your letter: Thank them for the workshop Mention what you found particularly helpful Suggest any improvements for future workshops You should write at least 150 words

Dear Sir.
I am writing to express gratitude to you. I have attend to know more unknown information about time management. Thank you for the workshop.
I could not finish more works on time before I attend your workshop, because I did not use to manage the time. I could not finish to speak and write on time mainly from speaking and writing mock tests. Therefore, I decided to attend your organized workshop of time management. Workshop was passed extremely brilliant. I could have more information during the workshop and understand my mistakes. After workshop, I practiced speaking and writing mock tests and my speaking and writing levels have been begun to above soon.Thank you for the workshop. I suggest that you should add the reading and listening sections to your workshop, too.
Thank you for your attention to this matter. I look forward to organize the next workshops.
Yours sincerely,
Eshboyev Aslbek.

5.5

The essay demonstrates a basic understanding of the letter format and includes the necessary components. However, the ideas are not fully developed, and the transitions between thoughts are somewhat abrupt. The letter lacks a clear flow, with ideas presented in a somewhat disjointed manner. The use of conjunctions and transitional phrases was minimal, further affecting the letter’s coherence. The organization could be improved by structuring sentences and paragraphs more effectively.

Suggestions
  • Use a variety of cohesive devices to improve the flow of your writing.
  • Make sure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that all sentences in the paragraph relate to this topic.

The letter uses a range of vocabulary that is generally appropriate for the task. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice, which slightly detract from the overall effectiveness of the letter. The letter employs basic vocabulary, but there are instances of awkward phrasing and incorrect word choices that affect clarity. The use of more precise and varied vocabulary could enhance the letter’s quality. Additionally, careful proofreading to correct lexical errors would improve the overall effectiveness of the letter.

The letter demonstrates a basic understanding of grammar and sentence structure. However, there are several grammatical errors that hinder the overall clarity and readability of the letter. The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, including issues with verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. These errors detract from the overall clarity and coherence of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy by reviewing and correcting these errors would enhance the overall quality of the letter.

The letter adequately addresses the task by expressing gratitude, mentioning what the writer found particularly helpful, and suggesting improvements. However, the letter could be more detailed and specific in its examples and suggestions. The letter briefly mentions the writer’s struggles with time management and the improvements after attending the workshop. However, it does not provide specific details or examples to fully illustrate these points. The letter could benefit from more specific examples and a clearer explanation of how the workshop helped in overcoming these challenges. Additionally, the suggestion for improvement is relevant but could be further elaborated upon for better task achievement.

Suggestions
  • Include specific examples of what you found helpful in the workshop and how it changed your approach to time management.
  • Elaborate on your suggestions for improving the workshop by providing more detailed recommendations.
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