The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, *20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares main exports of Southland in 2000,current and 2025 years.
Overall, the international tourism gradually increases over the period,additionaly holding the highest share every year,with only exception for the present year,while the reverse is true for meat products. Additionaly, the volume of dairy products boomed since 2000 before slight decline.
In 2000,meat products raised around 6 billion pounds,which is 2 billion less than that of international tourism. Further more,this disparity grew up to 3.5 billion in the current year. The peak of international tourism is anticipated to happen in 2025,which is equal to the present numbers of dairy products. Meat products will continue downward trend,reaching a low of 5 billion pounds.
The remaining category demonstrate a fluctuation. The peak number of approximately 10 billion in the current year which grew from the initial 7 billion for milk products. In contrast, this figure will slightly drop by 5% in the next year.
The essay presents information in a logical order but lacks clear linking words and cohesive devices.
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The essay uses a limited range of vocabulary with occasional errors.
The essay contains several grammatical errors and lacks complex sentence structures.
The essay addresses the task but lacks detailed analysis and some data is inaccurately reported.
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