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The chart shows the results of three surveys on absenteeism in a particular European country in the years 2000, 2005 and 2010. The results show the reasons people gave for not going to work .

The bar graph gives information about three distinct type of surveys results on absenteeism and workers reasons for why they were not going to go in certain one European country from 2000 till 2010.
Overall, figures witnessed growth in 3 reasons except for illness and family responsibilities it is worth noting that people more tend to do absenteeism because of their illnesses in all 3 years while workers less attend to work because of stress that is the lowest figure in whole span.
When it comes to people’s ilness reason , it’s share dropped significantly from about 45 in 200 till 35 in 2010 despite the downward trend it was and remained the dominant among 5 figures. As for stress, it’s figure experienced a slight drop from 2000 to 2005 with respective 7 and 4 . After that It grew dramatically to 13 in 2010.
With regard to personal needs like appointments, it showed 10 % hike beginning with 14 and ending with 24 % over the period under discussion. Moreover, there was a downward trend in family responsibilities figure from initial year to 2005 (the former- 28 , the latter – 25 ) and remained more or less the same at 25 until the end of the year. Although it si not noticeable change, there was a increase in the share of people with unexpected problems such as transport, weather and others in 2000 and thus was followed by a stagnation with at around 13 time frame overer 10 years

5.5

The essay lacks clear structure and logical flow. Transitions between ideas are abrupt, and the overall organization is weak.

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The essay uses a limited range of vocabulary with some repetition. There are occasional errors in word choice.

The essay contains frequent grammatical errors and awkward sentence structures, affecting clarity and readability.

The essay addresses the task but lacks depth in analysis and some key data points are not clearly explained.

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