The charts below show the number of people in Europe who were affected by four types of noise pollution by day and by night in cities and rural areas in 2007.
The bar charts show how many people in Europe had problem with noise from traffic, trains, aircraft, and industry in 2007. It also compares day and night time in cities and rural areas. In general, traffic made the most noise, while industry made the least. More people had noise problem in day than at night. Cities had more noise than rural areas.
In cities, traffic noise affected 68 million in the day and 48 million in night. Trains was second biggest, with 10 million in day and 8 million at night. Aircraft noise was smaller, affecting 4 million people during the day and 1 million at night. Industry noise was lowest, with only 1 million in day and 0.25 million at night.
In rural areas, traffic was also highest, with 35 million affected in day and 24 million at night. Trains noise affected 8 million in day and 6 million at night. Aircraft noise was low, only 2 million during the day and 1 million at night. Industry noise had no big effect in rural areas.
To conclusion traffic made most noise in both cities and rural places. People in cities had more noise problem than in rural areas.
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The essay is logically organized, with a clear comparison between cities and rural areas. However, transitions between sentences and paragraphs could be smoother.
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- Use more linking words to enhance flow.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence.
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The vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety. Some repetition and basic word choices are present.
The essay demonstrates a range of grammatical structures but contains some errors in agreement and article usage.
The essay addresses the task effectively, providing a clear comparison of noise pollution types. However, more detail could enhance understanding.
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- Include more specific data comparisons.
- Highlight key differences more explicitly.