The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
The given chart depicts information about the pineapple exports in top three producing countries in metric tons, at two points in time 2009 and 2019. Pie chart lists the breakdown of the cost for each pineapple in 2019.
Overall, bar chart shows that country A is the largest producer of pineapples in 2019. The pie chart illustrates that the costliest sector is distribution and retail and other segments have insignificant difference , except producer and export costs.
The most amount of pineapple produced in 2019 constitutes at around 10 metric tons in country A. Country B had produced approximately half of this number in 2009, however now their exports do not even reach 2000 kilograms. In addition, country C had the lowest point at around 0,5% in both years.
According to what is shown, distribution and retail to the consumer costs 35% of total which makes it most budget-draining category. Approximately half of that percentage distributes for profit. Taxes made up 16% of the total cost. The other two categories have similar values with 10% for import licenses and 12% for international transport. Together, producer and export costs are accounted for 9% with insignificant difference.
The essay has a basic structure with an introduction, overview, and details. However, some information is not clearly connected, and there are inconsistencies in data representation.
Suggestions
- Clarify data presentation for better understanding.
- Ensure consistent use of units and percentages.
- Improve logical flow between sentences.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary, but there are some inaccuracies and repetitive expressions.
The essay demonstrates basic grammatical structures but contains errors that affect comprehension.
The essay addresses the task but lacks detailed analysis and some data misinterpretation.
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- Include more detailed comparisons.
- Ensure accuracy in data representation.
- Provide clearer analysis of trends.