The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons relevant.
The maps demonstrate present industrial place in the town of Norbiton and planned development of the site
Overall, it is clear that, at the present time the place is full of factories, whereas in the planned development there will be public dwelling.
At the present time, in the north side of area there are farmland and river, whereas in south side of area there is a road, in the center of the road there is a way which binds with the middle of the area, where located rounded road, moreover there are 8 factories, 3 of them surrounded and remained factories located in order next to the road which attaches to rounded road from east side
In the planned future development there will be 2 rounded roads, one of them is in the center of the road which is in south side, the second one remained in the middle of the region. In planned future there will be none of factories, in stead of them they planned to put 7 dwellings, shops, medical centre, playground, school and bridge crossing the river
The essay presents information in a somewhat organized manner but lacks clear paragraphing and logical flow.
Suggestions
- Use clear paragraphing to separate different ideas.
- Improve the logical flow between sentences.
- Use linking words to enhance coherence.
The essay uses a limited range of vocabulary with some repetition and inaccuracies.
The essay shows a limited range of grammatical structures with frequent errors.
The essay addresses the task but lacks detail and clarity in describing the maps.
Suggestions
- Include more specific details about the changes.
- Ensure all main features are described accurately.
- Make relevant comparisons between the current and future plans.