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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate two schemes of Norbiton town sector: as it looks nowadays and how it will look in the future after renovation.
In general, the current structure of the area is quite simple and clear, it has several roads leading to the factory buildings that are located on the sides of the shown ways.
It is worth noting that significant changes are ahead in the infrastructure of this zone. First of all ordinary routes that include one way from the main road to the factory constructions with a ring road, whereas prospective scheme includes more forks as it was, that enhance the area of this land, making it broader and more reachable.In addition, the new road will cross the river and thereby provide access to land beyond the river, while the current plan has this river as a border.
Furthermore, big changes affected the factory and what will be located on this land. Instead of factory buildings, the future land infrastructure will have seven houses. Delving into the details, there will be shops on the left side and a medical centre on the right side of the entrance road.By turning right along the circular road you will be able to get to the playground on the left side and also to the school, which will be located at the end of this road, in comparison with the current plan where the next plant building is located.

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The essay provides a basic overview of the changes with some logical flow. However, transitions between ideas could be smoother.

Suggestions
  • Use more linking words to improve flow.
  • Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.
  • Use clearer comparisons between the current and future maps.

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety and precision.

The essay demonstrates a basic range of grammatical structures with some errors.

The essay addresses the task but lacks detailed comparisons and a clear overview.

Suggestions
  • Include more specific comparisons between the maps.
  • Provide a clearer summary of the main changes.
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