The table and charts below give information on the polish budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. the table shows where the money came from and The charts show how it was distributed. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The table and charts gives details on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one region of Britain. The table shows where the millions of pounds came from and charts show percentage of funds which were spent.
Overall, it is clear that , in 2018 budget of police was a little more than 2017 and 2017 police spent more percentage of fund to salary, moreover bulding’s and transport’s percentages remain unchanged.
In total from 2017 police budget amounted 304.7 millions of pounds, the majority part of this amount, 175.5 million, came from National Government, whereas the minority of this amount, 38 million, came from other sources. The remaining amount were from local taxes. In 2018 the major and minor remained unchanged, but almost all funds were a little more. Moreover the money from local taxes were pretty more rather than previous year.
In 2017 they spent 75 percent of fund for salaries, but in 2018 a little less, 69 percent. There is one category which remain unchanged, this is bulding and transport, in both periods it remained 17 percent. For technology in 2017 they spent 8 percent, whereas in 2018 they spent more by 6 percent
The essay presents information in a logical order but lacks clear linking words and phrases to enhance flow.
Suggestions
- Use more linking words to connect ideas.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear main idea.
- Avoid abrupt transitions between sentences.
The essay uses a limited range of vocabulary with some repetition and errors.
The essay contains several grammatical errors and lacks complex structures.
The essay addresses the task but lacks detailed analysis and comparison.
Suggestions
- Provide more detailed comparisons between the years.
- Include specific data to support statements.
- Summarize the main features more effectively.