WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The chart illustrates male and female workers which do some kinds of tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and house repairing) in particular country and the average time they spend doing those tasks.
Overall, cooking and cleaning were the two popular tasks that were performed by the large percentage of both genders and the two tasks that male and female spend more time than others.
In these particular country, just over 80% of women spent time for cooking, compared to around 60% of men, while 60% of women spend time for cleaning the men figure stood around 40%. On the other side, the larger percentage of men like pet care, just over 20%. Figure for house repairing was at approximately 18%.
In terms of time spend performing these type of tasks, women spend over 80minutes average time for cooking and just 70minutes a day for cleaning. Time which men spends for doing same tasks as women was slightly less a over 60 minutes and approximately 45 minutes respectively. In addition, while both male and female spend an equal time for pet caring, men spend significantlymore time for doing house repairs.
The essay presents information in a logical order but lacks smooth transitions between ideas.
Suggestions
- Use linking words to improve flow.
- Ensure consistency in terms used.
- Avoid abrupt shifts in topics.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary, but there are some inaccuracies and repetitions.
The essay contains several grammatical errors and lacks complex sentence structures.
The essay addresses the main features but lacks detailed comparisons and analysis.
Suggestions
- Include more detailed comparisons.
- Provide a clearer summary of key points.