You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words
These line charts provide key information about the amount of money spent in New Zealand imports from two different countries over 10 years period , the units are measured in Million usd.
Overall , it is clear from the two graphs that the imports from Austalia has increased ,whereas the Japanese one has decreased over that period. In addition , Australian imports are the biggest .
According to what is shown ,from 1994 to 1996 the imports from the two regions has progressively rise , then dramatically went down to 3000 in Australia and approximitly 4100 in Japan , then from 2000 to 2002 imports has reduced quickly .Moreover, Australian imports has reached the highest rate in 2004 which is 8000 , meanwhile , in the same year the Japanese ones has slightly decreased to 2000 which is the lowest amount over the 10 years .To add more , Austalian imports in 1999 were the smallest rate .
In conclusion , New Zealand imported from Australia much more than Japan in the years 1994-2004.
The essay lacks clear paragraphing and logical progression of ideas. Transitions between ideas are not smooth, leading to some confusion.
Suggestions
- Use clear paragraphing to separate different points.
- Improve the logical flow of information.
- Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
The vocabulary is limited and repetitive. There are errors in word choice and spelling.
The essay contains several grammatical errors, including issues with verb tense and subject-verb agreement.
The essay attempts to summarize the graphs but lacks detailed analysis and accurate comparisons. Some key points are missing.
Suggestions
- Include more detailed analysis of the trends.
- Ensure accurate and clear comparisons between the two graphs.
- Highlight key data points and changes over time.